The red one is the first planet I've ever created. I'm so damn proud of this.

You should be, because these are some fucking awesome planets. :DSniperwhere wrote:I'm so damn proud of this.
Posts from the old forums: 11,194mintnut wrote:Oh my life, STRAP ON A PAIR! Get over it, make better maps, innit?
My biggest issue is in fact the background. I think the stars are too clustered and it lacks a "spacey" feel to it.Donfuy wrote:The planets are really, really cool, but the background seems kind of boring, without the depth (that it's always associated with space), both space-wise as color-wise. Depth.
You should be, because these are some fucking awesome planets. :DSniperwhere wrote:I'm so damn proud of this.
If you have the option to upgrade to Photoshop, do so immediately.Sniperwhere wrote:One question: Do you think it's time I graduate from GIMP and move onto Photoshop or keep using GIMP?
I was using Scatter HVS(or something) which made the star effect, which maybe I should go back and replace.Techno wrote:If you have the option to upgrade to Photoshop, do so immediately.Sniperwhere wrote:One question: Do you think it's time I graduate from GIMP and move onto Photoshop or keep using GIMP?
I really like the wallpaper, especially the fact that the closes planet has a nice smooth texture while the middle has a rough one. I agree with Donfuy about the depth though, I only wish some of the stars in the background were varied in size, brightness, or even slight tints of color.
I still think it's brilliant.
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The pickier you are, the happier I am. Because I can't be expected to learn from "Good job"'s all the time, not that I mind them. It's detailed feed back like that which help me know what to change. So thank you.Manus Australis wrote:One of the rules I learned in a really simple painting class was to never identify your light source. Of course, this rule can be broken, but I think for the best effect here you need to completely remove the giant sun that is in the top right. It's distracting and is really annoying to look at.
From there, I agree with a couple others: redo the background. It needs more of a "I'm in the dark and there are faint stars that are all around," rather than the stars being so clustered and taking up the bulk of the image. The whole thing is too flat as opposed to being deep.
I think you have a good start but it'll be quite a bit of work before I personally find it truly stunning. Appreciate the effort though! I'm sure it took a long time and that is something to be proud of, regardless of all the things I'm being picky about.
He did say he made them. And on many occasions, he has thought about photoshop, but he always sticks to GIMP D:<Aphex_n wrote:Did you use a render for the planets?
Also if you can, upgrade to photoshop. This will also sort out your star problem, as i can send you some fantastic star brushes which would make this look epic.
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Nuh-uh! It's all relative! D:<PsychoSnail wrote:(after all, there is a lot of space in space)
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I know. I just need to find the time for that as each star will need to be custom. :/PsychoSnail wrote:I agree that the planets are awesome but the background isn't - it just looks like a bunch of noise right now. Spreading the stars out more (after all, there is a lot of space in space) and adding some more variation among them would make this look a lot better. This illustrates pretty well what I mean.
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