Race Help

[rambo5252]

I'm not very good at making races and i figures you guys could help me out. Like tips or hints or what im doing wrong

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This is the race i made today, feel free to work with it or just tell me whats wrong with it and ill try to learn
(also any tuts or anything would be very helpful)

[Rikaninja]

Feeled really empty in the top left. At first you're not sure where to go so you just keep going and jump up on the ramp.
When you do this the chaingun usually gets you on the corner.
I think it would be good for a begginer to start with a race with one route only which is not very easy to get off.
It wasn't very flowy.

BTW;
Riobe makes awesome races. So does destiny. You could PM them.

[Yoshimo]

Here's what I would have done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|5^182,38!6^230.785714285714,372,2,0,2,2!3^444,324!12^468,540!12^480,540!12^492,546!7^588,60,3!7^552,60,3!7^624,60,3!9^720,72,1,1,14,13,0,0,-1!9^84,84,1,1,6,2,0,0,-1!9^84,84,1,1,7,2,0,0,-1!9^180,36,0,1,7,1,0,0,0!11^180,36,180,36!0^396,324!0^390,312!0^402,312!0^402,300!0^414,312!0^414,300!0^420,288!0^426,300!0^432,282!0^438,294!0^450,294!0^432,222!0^426,234!0^420,222!0^414,234!0^420,246!0^408,246!0^408,258!0^396,258!0^396,270!0^384,264!0^384,276!0^600,30!0^600,42!0^612,36!0^624,30!0^624,42!0^576,42!0^576,30!0^564,36!0^552,30!0^552,42!0^540,36!0^528,42!0^528,30!0^738,522!0^726,510!0^738,510!0^750,504!0^738,498!0^750,492!0^762,486!0^750,480!0^762,474!0^750,468!7^156,348,1!7^120,348,1!7^84,348,1!7^588,324,3!7^552,324,3!7^516,324,3!4^-1923.42857142856,570,-1!6^108,492,3,0,1,!9^132,468,1,0,4,20,1,0,-1!9^540,300,0,0,4,20,1,-1,0!9^156,372,1,0,4,20,1,0,0!3^252,570!8^617.571428571431,204,0!10^468,552!7^396,144,0!7^396,180,0!6^324,225.857142857143,2,0,2,1!10^612,204!12^456,546!12^444,552!7^300,324,3!7^264,324,3!7^228,324,3!9^708,60,1,1,13,13,0,0,-1

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[Yoshimo]

Way better!

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